The great universe,
The Tao is the master of it all.
He cares for us,
Shows us the way.
Yet he allows us freedom to discover ourselves.
We are given the opportunity to be free,
Fluid,
Graceful,
Happy.
The Tao gives us these privileges
So that we can find him in ourselves.
The Tao holds ambition and greatness
Do not waste your life by being unforgiving and hateful.
Allow the Tao to open your soul,
And never again shall you be disappointed.
I really like the way you wrote the poem, it flowed really well.The formatting was really nice too. :)
ReplyDeleteThe message of your poem is very meaningful which makes the poem itself very strong and understanding. I really like how you formatted the poem, as well as, how it expresses the Tao.
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