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Thursday, May 26, 2016

5 C's

Every diamond has 5 c’s
Cut, Carat, Clarity, Color
But the one people seldom speak of is
Cruelty
Cruelty is what drives the price
Cruelty is what makes these diamonds so desirable
Cruelty makes these diamonds so available
The more cruelty put into these diamonds
The cheaper they become

Children are slaughtered
To find these carbon rocks
Women become slaves
To find these lustrous rocks
People get ripped from their families
To find these pretty rocks
Children are dismembered
All for a piece of these seemingly priceless rocks

This rock drives the economy of these countries
Because when people purchase these rocks
The slavery continues
And the cycle continues
Buy a rock, buy a person
How much are diamonds worth anyway?
100$? 1,000$? 1,000,000$?

Are they really worth more humans?

Friday, April 1, 2016

Kite Runner Metaphor - Barriers


            Amir's life was heavily affected by his past experiences. His guilt had led him to construct barriers between himself and the people around him. The fence represents the barrier he puts between himself and those he loves, such as Babba and Soraya. At points in his life, like his graduation and wedding days, Amir was able to let go of his past in his moments of happiness, allowing him to begin to break down the barrier. However, something would always come around to remind him of his shameful past, such as Babba's quote, "I wish Hassan had been with us today" (133) This would force Amir to rebuild the barricade. Events such as this are represented by the newer piece of wood amidst the darker planks. Despite the barriers of his past, Amir searches for a chance at redemption and new life, represented by the fern at the bottom of the photo.

Tuesday, March 15, 2016

Diamonds To Die For

Maxwell Kofman
Ms. Bennett
World Lit Honors Second Period
15 March 2016
Diamonds To Die For
A man ponders the decision and finally comes to a conclusion. “I love her, I’m going to propose with the largest diamond I can find. They say I need to spend three months salary to be respected by my fiancĂ©. I’ll do anything, even if it means buying this overly expensive rock that will no doubt leave me in even deeper debt. ” This idea was implanted in the millions of people who have fallen victim to the popular campaign by the De Beers diamond corporation, which has sparked the bloodiest revolution in Africa’s history. In fact, “more than 50,000 have been killed to date” (Baker) in Sierra Leone’s civil war, sparked by these simple carbon minerals. However, this is just the beginning of the bloody affair.
The militant groups move into the diamond rich lands  and construct mines. According to Paul Armstrong, the militants capture or hire the cheapest labor force available to use as slaves, most commonly children. In fact, “46% of miners were between the ages of 5 and 16” (Brilliant). This is child labor in any country. Diamond mining is a tough process for adults as it is, and it is often just too much for children. This leads to numerous deaths in kids as they are often overworked. Even for adults, the working conditions are far below current legal standards. Lydia Polgreen from the Time Magazine states that “The tunnels are pitch-black and narrow. They often fill with dangerous fumes. Miners sometimes spend 48 hours straight working in the tunnels. The open pits are dangerous, too: heavy rains cause mudslides and collapses” (Polgreen). These mines are not built with the workers’ safety in mind. Whether it be a collapse or by suffocation, people have to be cautious and on edge all of the time, as one mistake will lead to their demise. Since these mines are not regulated, the working conditions will remain poor until the government stops them.
The governments of all afflicted countries recognize this issue and have been working to stop the terror, but there is one major roadblock - they would be stopping themselves! “Despite a costly effort to unite the nation's many militias into a single national army, plus billions of dollars spent on international peacekeepers... the government is unable or unwilling to force these fighters -- who wear government army uniforms and collect government paychecks -- to leave the mountain” (Polgreen). Most of the countries that are in this terrible situation have no real army. Instead, they are composed primarily of a trained militia unit. Unfortunately, this trained militia, due to their easy access to weaponry, gain control of the mines for their own use. In fact, they even get paid to maintain control of these mines as the government pays them to be a member of the official army. Other countries have recognized that this horrific situation was not making much progress under the governments of the affected countries, and have begun to take international efforts.

The United Nations have recently passed the Kimberley Process Certification Scheme. The act now has “54 participants, representing 81 countries” (Kimberley) . It is now virtually impossible to sell diamonds without “certifying shipments of rough diamonds as ‘conflict-free'” (Kimberley). Currently, this is the best offense to the situation. It has been working very well, as they now account for up to 99.8% of all rough diamonds (Kimberley). Although this is a major success for the diamond industry as a whole, the only thing standing in the way of total elimination of these diamonds is buyer awareness. Reliable suppliers will try their hardest to maintain a clean reputation, but there will always be deals for incredibly cheap diamonds. Therefore, the next time you buy an expensive ring for your true love for a fraction of it’s value, make sure you think about the children, the wars, and the years of brutal fighting involved to bring you this jewelry.

Works Cited:
- Armstrong, Paul. "What Are 'conflict Diamonds?'" CNN. Cable News Network, 5 Dec. 2011. Web. 15 Mar. 2016.
- Baker, Aryn, and Tshikapa. "Why the Blood Diamond Trade Won't Die."Time. Time, n.d. Web. 15 Mar. 2016.
-"Brilliant Earth." Brilliant Earth. Brilliant Earth, n.d. Web. 07 Mar. 2016.
-"The Kimberley Process (KP)." The Kimberley Process (KP). Kimberley Process, n.d. Web. 15 Mar. 2016.
-Mambondiyani, Andrew. "The Pollution Fallout From Zimbabwe's Blood Diamonds." E360.yale. Yale University, 24 May 2012. Web. 15 Mar. 2016.
-Polgreen, Lydia. "Congo’s Riches, Looted by Renegade Troops." The New York Times. The New York Times, 15 Nov. 2008. Web. 04 Mar. 2016.

Monday, October 12, 2015

Sheepskin Coats and Choices of Your Own

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The author uses the symbol of the sheepskin coat to signify the time the narrator felt a desire for literature. When the narrator decided to copy passages of a book onto the inside of his coat, it was the first time he made a decision truly for himself, not under the influence of his family, friends, or even Chairman Mao. To start making your own decisions is to genuinely come of age.


“Picture, if you will, a boy of nineteen, still slumbering in the limbo of adolescence, having heard nothing but revolutionary blather about patriotism, Communism, ideology, and propaganda all his life, falling headlong into a story of awakening desire, passion, impulsive action, love, all of the subjects that had, until then, been hidden from me”(p57).


Once the narrator caught his first glimpse of true literature, he was deeply affected by the new ideas he absorbed from his reading, and it caused an immediate change in the narrator, he felt the need to keep a record somehow, of the messages he learned, and the feelings he was feeling from these words of Balzac:  ”It was the first time in my life that I had felt any desire to copy sentences from a book. … I decided I would write directly onto the inside of my sheepskin coat”(58). The narrator’s decision to copy passages onto the inside of his coat was the first time that he kept something secret, and hidden from society, his community, and even his best friend Luo for the time being. Keeping this for himself was the first time he made a decision for himself: a true marker of his coming of age.


- by: Cassie, Max, Kate, and Amy

Friday, October 2, 2015

Tao de Ching Poem Maxwell Kofman

When lies are told
Society crumbles
Society falls when the support beams break


The truth centers inside people
it is ever present, never gone
yet it is corrupted by daily use


Politicians, yet the mailman
The queen, yet the clerk
Everybody breaks it
Nobody admits it
without this we would not be


It makes us human
but we only truly become human
once we break it
We live by it
but once we break it
yin tips the scale


It keeps life moving on
it keeps the gears turning
if it halters, the gears will stutter
life will still go on when it cracks
but it will feel wrong
because it is wrong


We as a society depend on it
it is what keeps us true
We as a society
call it honesty