Yin and Yang can't be apart
There is no Yin without Yang
There is no Yang without Yin
Yin and Yang are interdependent on each other
Two puzzle pieces that form a whole
One can't work without the other
Both form an intertwined soul
Yin and Yang can't be rushed
The day flows into the night
The night flows into the day
If you want one you need both
You can't just take one because it destroys the other
Taking the other doesn't allow growth
You can't just choose it another
The Yin and Yang chooses itself
No one has the right to decide otherwise
I like the rhythm that your poem has and how at some points some of your words rhyme. I also like how you convey to the reader the connection between Yin and Yang and how you develop this idea throughout your poem.
ReplyDeleteEstela your poem was great, it really helped me understand the yin and yang. Nice picture! :)
ReplyDeleteI really liked hoe you compared Yin and Yang to puzzle pieces that you need to make the whole, it really enforces the point that you need both to live by the Tao.
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ReplyDeleteI liked the comparisons you made to each pair of opposites and how "one cannot work without the other."
ReplyDeleteI really love this poem! It's really well-written, and the Yin and Yang sound amazing. I also really enjoyed how you made them sound like a higher power.
ReplyDeleteVery nice flow and I like how eloquently written it was
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