The Tao.
The beginning and end to
humankind and the universe.
Let the Tao control you,
you shouldn’t control the Tao.
Open yourself,
learn from your mistakes,
and bring peace to the obstacles
that the Tao may bring you.
Depend on your sorrow
to fulfill your happiness.
You have to go through dark
to finally reach the light.
You have to be in peace with yin
to achieve the yang.
I feel as if this poem could have come straight out of the packet. It reads exactly like all of the others and it portrays the Tao in a similar style. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI love how you tied in both Yin and Yang and the Tao. No poems really connected them, so I love that you were able to.
ReplyDeleteI think your poem was really well done. I like how you were able to tie in many aspects of the Tao.
ReplyDeleteI like how you were able to use the concepts of control and emotion and it wasn't too long
ReplyDeleteGood job dude!
I like how you were able to use the concepts of control and emotion and it wasn't too long
ReplyDeleteGood job dude!
I like how you were able to use the concepts of control and emotion and it wasn't too long
ReplyDeleteGood job dude!