Just as the stream flows
a balanced mixture of yin and yang
a perfect embodiment of the Tao
so must you flow.
Just as the seasons change
from dry to crisp to white to fresh and new
do not be afraid to change
embrace your inner turmoil.
There is no beginning without an end
no life without death
no perfection without imperfection.
Be a wanderer
seek out the darkness to bring the light
live in winter to appreciate summer
embrace all parts of yourself
only then can you be whole and in unity with
the Tao.
Your word choice really adds to the poem. I like the description of seasons changing, the stanza with "There is no beginning without an end," and the "Be a wanderer" stanza; it really represents the idea of the Tao.
ReplyDeleteI really like how the first 2 stanzas are repetition of the same idea because it flows really well and really emphasizes the idea. I also like how you compare opposites and give the reader an opportunity to connect personally.
ReplyDeleteYour poem uses unique imagery that actually helped me visualize the Tao in a different way. For example, using the comparison of seasons changing, you represent the need for change and flexibility described in the Tao really well.
ReplyDeleteI like the parallelism in the first two stanzas and you somehow managed to describe something so simple yet without using cliches. Good job, I really enjoyed reading this!
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