Why yang
Well who knows
The yin is the dark
The yang is the light
They're stuck together like the moon and the night sky
They're inseparable,
but why
who knows, that's just life
They're better together then they are apart
The yin
The yang
belong together no matter what
I really like how you compare yin and yang to the moon and night sky. It really shows how yin and yang complement each other.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you kept it short and simple while showing what Yin and Yang truly are.
ReplyDeleteI love how you talked about how the Yin and Yang are better together than they are apart, and like your comparison of the yin and yang to the moon and the night sky!
ReplyDeleteYour poem has a different mood to it than the Tao Te Ching. This is further supported by the lack of punctuation. Some things are just unknowable.
ReplyDeleteI like how the simplicity of the poem is ever so complex. Emphasizes the importance of balance really with just some repetition.
ReplyDeleteI like how instead of describing the Tao, you question the Tao. It makes this poem very deep and meaningful
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