To be one with the Tao
You must be one with yourself.
To be one with yourself
You must understand those close to you.
To be one with the Tao, you must let yourself free
Free yourself from the distractions of the world
and let yourself flow with the Tao.
Flow with the earth which is the Tao.
Flow with the universe which is the Tao.
Accept the Tao to be one with yourself.
I like your connection between the Tao and the Earth and how it is showing the Tao as omnipresent.
ReplyDeleteI like how you made a kind of movement in your poem through the use of the motion of earth, water, and the universe. It was good word choice; it made it easier to understand and feel what your poem was portraying.
ReplyDeleteI like how the wording you chose really makes the poem flow, and this effectively gets your message across.
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