I like the layout of your info graphic, and how engaging it is. One question I have is that will you talk more about how scientists have figured out how to erase memories.
I really like how you summarized each one of your main ideas in the infographic using short, but very well-worded phrases to give the reader a summary of what the main idea is. I also liked how you split it up in the past, present, and future as they really were the main focusing points about subconsciousness. Can you explain more about how the brain's memory storage affects our subconsciousness?
I really like the visual simplicity of your infographic as it allows the audience to pay more attention to the given information which was phrased effectively with only the main ideas. Can you elaborate more on how our subconscious plays a significant role in impacting our memories?
You've got a really really nice organization and feel to your presentation. This could just be me (so it might not actually be a good tip) but it also feels a little like you could include a little more specifics into your infographic. As it is right now, it feels like you state things but then don't go into detail. But, I guess you'll include the explanations and details in your presentation. I'd like to hear about how scientists have figured out how to delete memories.
I really like the chronological part of the infographic. It adds to the concept you're trying to portray. The comparison of the brain to a computer is really interesting.
I really like how this infographic is really easy to understand, and is very pleasing to the eye. The topic is also very interesting. The use of arrows simplifies everything and really supplements your facts. A few more visuals/ images in color would make this infographic perfect. Good job!
I like the minimal design and organization of your infographic. Specifically, the timeline is a great touch, allowing you to provide examples related to the past, present, and the future. However, my question is what is your unifying statement? Your infographic seems to lack a clear thesis, only talking about memory in slightly unrelated examples.
I think that the statistic about how much space your brain would have if it were a computer is really interesting and it drew me in to this infographic. I really hope you talk more about how past, present, and future experiences shape our brain in your presentation.
I love the design you chose for your infographic, I think it's simple and contains good organization. The details and examples that you use really connect with the idea behind selective memory and how it affects us, and I think you did a really good job of explaining that.
I like the clean layout and color choice for this infographic. But does this presentation have anything to do with the subconscious? (It does make a cool title though)
The design is really nice, and the text is nicely spaced such that the reader can easily see what information goes with what topic. I like how the infographic splits everything into three sections, and I like that it flows in "chronological" order.
I wasn't really sure what the brain to computer reference was for. Why does it matter that scientists can delete memories? Now, assuming that you can actually clone a human being, if you can't clone memories, then what would that clone remember? Nothing at all?
I like the layout of your info graphic, and how engaging it is. One question I have is that will you talk more about how scientists have figured out how to erase memories.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you summarized each one of your main ideas in the infographic using short, but very well-worded phrases to give the reader a summary of what the main idea is. I also liked how you split it up in the past, present, and future as they really were the main focusing points about subconsciousness. Can you explain more about how the brain's memory storage affects our subconsciousness?
ReplyDeleteThe organization of your infographic is great. You could add more images and detail to the bullet points to make your infographic more engaging.
ReplyDeleteI really like the visual simplicity of your infographic as it allows the audience to pay more attention to the given information which was phrased effectively with only the main ideas. Can you elaborate more on how our subconscious plays a significant role in impacting our memories?
ReplyDeleteYou've got a really really nice organization and feel to your presentation. This could just be me (so it might not actually be a good tip) but it also feels a little like you could include a little more specifics into your infographic. As it is right now, it feels like you state things but then don't go into detail. But, I guess you'll include the explanations and details in your presentation. I'd like to hear about how scientists have figured out how to delete memories.
ReplyDeleteI really like the chronological part of the infographic. It adds to the concept you're trying to portray. The comparison of the brain to a computer is really interesting.
ReplyDeleteI really like how this infographic is really easy to understand, and is very pleasing to the eye. The topic is also very interesting. The use of arrows simplifies everything and really supplements your facts. A few more visuals/ images in color would make this infographic perfect. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI like the minimal design and organization of your infographic. Specifically, the timeline is a great touch, allowing you to provide examples related to the past, present, and the future. However, my question is what is your unifying statement? Your infographic seems to lack a clear thesis, only talking about memory in slightly unrelated examples.
ReplyDeleteI think that the statistic about how much space your brain would have if it were a computer is really interesting and it drew me in to this infographic. I really hope you talk more about how past, present, and future experiences shape our brain in your presentation.
ReplyDeleteI love the design you chose for your infographic, I think it's simple and contains good organization. The details and examples that you use really connect with the idea behind selective memory and how it affects us, and I think you did a really good job of explaining that.
ReplyDeleteI like the clean layout and color choice for this infographic. But does this presentation have anything to do with the subconscious? (It does make a cool title though)
ReplyDeleteThe design is really nice, and the text is nicely spaced such that the reader can easily see what information goes with what topic. I like how the infographic splits everything into three sections, and I like that it flows in "chronological" order.
ReplyDeleteI wasn't really sure what the brain to computer reference was for. Why does it matter that scientists can delete memories?
Now, assuming that you can actually clone a human being, if you can't clone memories, then what would that clone remember? Nothing at all?