I really liked your visuals and the set up of your infographic. I thought it was very neat and easy to follow/it was nice to look at. I didn't really understand how the "Participant conformed in Asch Line Experiment" fit in, but (hopefully :)) it will make sense when you present. Just to let you know there were a couple of typos. :D Bye Ellaa (and others).
The format of your presentation is really nice, I could tell your presentation could really flow well. One thing I would personally like to see is a transition of the factual quotes and claims maybe supported with some realistic analogies AND the sources. From the infographic it kind of seems like you can build up to your claim, make it engaging.
The format of your presentation is really nice, I could tell your presentation could really flow well. One thing I would personally like to see is a transition of the factual quotes and claims maybe supported with some realistic analogies AND the sources. From the infographic it kind of seems like you can build up to your claim, make it engaging.
The color scheme of this graphic is really nice. In your presentation you should mainly identify/define certain parts of your graphic, such as "DNA Exneration (is this a typo?), Cross-Racial Misidentification, and the Asch Line Experiment
I like the formatting, as it allows you to present a lot of information and unique points. It does feel like a lot of the information is out of context, however. For example, the first source seems to misrepresent your evidence. 75% of eyewitnesses aren't wrong, but 75% of innocent people convicted had bad eyewitnesses in their trials. Additionally, the Asch Line experiment isn't explained. By clearing up these inconsistencies, your info graphic will be much clearer.
I like the formatting, as it allows you to present a lot of information and unique points. It does feel like a lot of the information is out of context, however. For example, the first source seems to misrepresent your evidence. 75% of eyewitnesses aren't wrong, but 75% of innocent people convicted had bad eyewitnesses in their trials. Additionally, the Asch Line experiment isn't explained. By clearing up these inconsistencies, your info graphic will be much clearer.
I really like the formatting, it is easy to follow. Somethings don't make sense right away, like Asch Line Experiment, but I'm sure if your explain them in detail when your present, that shouldn't be a problem.
I really like the statistics you used, because they are really effective in drawing a reader in and they are super interesting. I hope you talk more about the Asch Line Experiment in your presentation, because I was a little bit confused as to what that was.
I really liked your visuals and the set up of your infographic. I thought it was very neat and easy to follow/it was nice to look at. I didn't really understand how the "Participant conformed in Asch Line Experiment" fit in, but (hopefully :)) it will make sense when you present. Just to let you know there were a couple of typos. :D Bye Ellaa (and others).
ReplyDeleteThe format of your presentation is really nice, I could tell your presentation could really flow well. One thing I would personally like to see is a transition of the factual quotes and claims maybe supported with some realistic analogies AND the sources. From the infographic it kind of seems like you can build up to your claim, make it engaging.
ReplyDeleteThe format of your presentation is really nice, I could tell your presentation could really flow well. One thing I would personally like to see is a transition of the factual quotes and claims maybe supported with some realistic analogies AND the sources. From the infographic it kind of seems like you can build up to your claim, make it engaging.
ReplyDeleteThe color scheme of this graphic is really nice. In your presentation you should mainly identify/define certain parts of your graphic, such as "DNA Exneration (is this a typo?), Cross-Racial Misidentification, and the Asch Line Experiment
ReplyDeleteI like the formatting, as it allows you to present a lot of information and unique points. It does feel like a lot of the information is out of context, however. For example, the first source seems to misrepresent your evidence. 75% of eyewitnesses aren't wrong, but 75% of innocent people convicted had bad eyewitnesses in their trials. Additionally, the Asch Line experiment isn't explained. By clearing up these inconsistencies, your info graphic will be much clearer.
ReplyDeleteI like the formatting, as it allows you to present a lot of information and unique points. It does feel like a lot of the information is out of context, however. For example, the first source seems to misrepresent your evidence. 75% of eyewitnesses aren't wrong, but 75% of innocent people convicted had bad eyewitnesses in their trials. Additionally, the Asch Line experiment isn't explained. By clearing up these inconsistencies, your info graphic will be much clearer.
ReplyDeleteI really like the layout of your infographic. It's not too busy and it's easy to follow and understand.
ReplyDeleteI really like the formatting, it is easy to follow. Somethings don't make sense right away, like Asch Line Experiment, but I'm sure if your explain them in detail when your present, that shouldn't be a problem.
ReplyDeleteI really like the statistics you used, because they are really effective in drawing a reader in and they are super interesting. I hope you talk more about the Asch Line Experiment in your presentation, because I was a little bit confused as to what that was.
ReplyDeleteThe evidence is clear and simple. It's nice that the visual follows a path, it makes it easy to understand.
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