Sitting in this classroom
Waiting for the speeches
This club meeting isn’t like the others
In an unfamiliar room with three unfamiliar people
I wait to hear their life story
The ones that will remind me of my brother
For my brother and them are connected
Woven together by
the holes and scars
on their body
Connected by the pain they have suffered
By the endless hospital visits
I planned my future in order to help those
who are
connected
My plans have not derailed but they have gotten more opaque
The hospital has become like a second home
To me,
And I have gotten use to explaining my brother’s
Condition
It isn’t as painful now as it was
So many years ago.
Everything has become so commonplace
And with that the fight I once had
Died a little.
As I listen to the people standing in front of me
Whose stories sting my soul
I think of my plans.
I soak up every word being spoken
The future doesn’t seem so far
My help doesn’t seem so hopeless
As the last person sits down
Everyone in the room applause
Their stories have awoken my passion once again
Their stories have moved me
With their stories in mind
My future plans are again in reach
I vow to help those
who are
connected
I really like the enjambment you use throughout your poem. It helps me understand the significance of certain lines and leaves a lasting impact, especially in the last part, where there are a lot of lines breaks.
ReplyDeleteI love the repetition you got going on of the word "connected". It really emphasizes what you're trying to say. My favorite line is, "Whose stories sting my soul".
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