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Thursday, May 26, 2016

Chasing Dreams

Chase your dreams they say
but don’t let it go to your head
don’t pull the stars from the sky
without knowing how to reach that high
after all you’re only sixteen
without a doctorate degree
or your acceptance to Yale
you’re still not a satisfied teen  

Chase your dreams, they say
but don’t forget you have to take a least 3 ap classes this year
go to soccer practice at 4
SAT prep is at 5
remember what we said about our family dinner always being at 7?
And
you should get a good night rest because tomorrow
tomorrow, is a whole other day

Chase your dreams, they say
but don’t go into art,
that lifeless face that you spent all night
trying to get the perfect stroke to resemble your eyes
won’t pay for any of your bills
or glorify the importance of our family name  

Are you chasing your dreams, they ask
have you actually thought about what you want to be in life?
perhaps, an actress that never hides her figure
living her lavish lifestyle
getting high of the fame is what triggers.
Or
an athlete whose calves will explode
on the last 100 meter dash
running till his death
born to be feeling that rush

Chasing dreams in a world that forces me to change my visions
twists all of my perspective
and won't let me take my own decisions
is a world that I fear
for my children and their children.
They won’t ever be okay
because the world is a cruel and mean and nasty place
it wants to see who will suffer
and who will endure the pain

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5 comments:

  1. I really like your use of repetition. My favorite line is: "remember what we said about our family dinner always being at 7?" I can totally relate to this poem.

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  2. I like how the poem takes "Chase your dreams" and debunks it.

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  3. I like your use of rhyme. I like: "perhaps an actress that never hides her figure/living her lavish life style/getting high of the fame is what triggers." both for the rhyme and the alliteration as well.

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  4. I really like the overall structure of your poem and how it strengthens your meaning. My favorite line is, "or glorify the importance of our family name".

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  5. I really liked how the tone changes throughout the poem and keeps the reader engaged. My favorite part of the poem was "don’t pull the stars from the sky/ without knowing how to reach that high"

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